Dear marthon:
        I'm  very glad that you'll visit London soon later  for so long time that I haven't seen you.
        These years,I have been studying here.when I came here,I could  not join my classmates,and
couldn't adapt to the foods.WhileAs time pass by,I feel better now.My oral english  is very pool at first,but now I can  communite with them fluently. Other subjects  are so easy  that I am good at them home and abroad.Last year,I made  Sara become  my girl friend,and she is also glad that you come here.
          I know that you come here first time,so Sara  and Idecide to guide you some interests.We are sure you will be interested in them.If time is enough,to shop some  bargain is a good idea.London is one of the world's shopping heaven,you will enjoy it..
          Best regards
                                                                                                                                  yours  fay


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楼主发这个英文信什么意思，要俺干什么？

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引用第1楼woshi++于2007-12-04 12:00发表的  :
楼主发这个英文信什么意思，要俺干什么？

求外语达人帮忙修改

MS有很多拼写错误呀

fluently
Others subjects  －other subject
While time pass by-as time goes by
poolat -poor

还有语法上也有些错误！！
像是中文直接翻译过去的

Give you a wise suggestion: 先自己在word里改一下，去除语法和拼写错误，然后再发上来，这样别人看着也舒服哈，我有空肯定给你改的哈

I'm  very glad that you'll visit London soon later  for so long time 加主语I haven't seen you.
        These years,I have been studying here.when I came here,I could  not join my classmates,and couldn't adapt to the foods.While 应该用AS time pass by,Ifeel better now.My oral english  is very poolat 应该改为POOR AT first,but now I can  communite with them  fluencely错改为fluently. Others 改为OTHER  subjects  are so easy  that I am good at them home and abroad.Last year,删掉(I made  )Sara become 改为BECAME  my girl friend,and she is also glad that you come here.
          I know that you come here 加 FOR THE  first time,so Sara  and Idecide to guide you (some interests.)什么意思>?We suee改为 ARE SURE  you will be interested in them.If time is enough,to shop some  bargain is a good idea.London is one of the world's shopping heaven,you will enjoy it..

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引用第7楼chanel于2007-12-04 17:09发表的  :
I'm  very glad that you'll visit London soon later  for so long time 加主语I haven't seen you.
        These years,I have been studying here.when I came here,I could  not join my classmates,and couldn't adapt to the foods.While 应该用AS time pass by,Ifeel better now.My oral english  is very poolat 应该改为POOR AT first,but now I can  communite with them  fluencely错改为fluently. Others 改为OTHER  subjects  are so easy  that I am good at them home and abroad.Last year,删掉(I made  )Sara become 改为BECAME  my girl friend,and she is also glad that you come here.
          I know that you come here 加 FOR THE  first time,so Sara  and Idecide to guide you (some interests.)什么意思>?We suee改为 ARE SURE  you will be interested in them.If time is enough,to shop some  bargain is a good idea.London is one of the world's shopping heaven,you will enjoy it..

谢谢MM

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引用第5楼qkshan于2007-12-04 15:47发表的  :
还有语法上也有些错误！！
像是中文直接翻译过去的

我也有这种感觉好象的确是

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引用第9楼阿董于2007-12-04 19:12发表的  :



我也有这种感觉好象的确是

本来我英文就菜

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引用第10楼刀花动于2007-12-04 19:13发表的  :

本来我英文就菜

粘到WORD里面吧，好象很严重

LZ在做该错题