The Importance of Reading Classics
      It  is very important for us to read classic.When we were primary students,our teacher told us to read 'Read house's dream' ,'Travelling in west' and  so on.IN these books,we know how to become a person who will do good to people and how to be a great man.It is fertile in clasics.
      However,these days,there are few and few people who enjoy reading clasics,for example,in our room,MR Shen and MR Zhao even don't read 2 calssics these years.Maybe there are too many other ineresting things aroud us,such as net games,gambleing.These things cost us much time.Another reason may be that people is easy to feel happy when he read hummerrous book other than classics.
      In my opinon,as a collage stuent,we should read some classics in our school time,and in that case we can obtain much more than only studying or playing.When we do this,we  may enhance our ethic and height our vision.
    请外语达人帮忙修改，谢谢。


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第三句，in these books..

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第二句，when we were...
第三句，in these books..

谢谢boss

When were primary students,our teacher told us to read 'Read house's dream' ,没有主语
we know how o become a person        可能少打了一个T吧TO
Another reason may people is easy to feel happy 应该后面的句子做从句.MAY BE THAT
还有PEOPLE ARE
read hummerrous book not than classics.应该用 OTHER THAN