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010  "When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
   

        The statement that people succeed only because of hard work and luck has nothing to do with success is too extreme and ruled out the circumstances that luck does play a critical role in people's success. As far as I am concerned, luck is also an indispensable factor in people's success, although it is quite unpredictable and hard working is the premise for that luck to happen.
        To begin with, it is well known that hard work plays a major role in people' success. Through human history, I can not conjure up that a man who succeeded merely because of luck. All of the prominent figures in the history who succeed, like Thomas Edison, James Watt, and Einstein, they were all assiduous and industrious. Hard work paved their ways toward future success and made them possible for the people after them to remember. And Thomas Edison once said," success is 99percent of perspration plus 1percent inspiration." Thus, people without the spirit of hard working, rarely can success no matter what fields they work in.
      Additionally, hard working is the precondition for success regardless of luck. When luck does come, it is the people who are hard working and totally indulge themselves in that area can sense the luck and then grab it, make the most out of it. People who are lazy and only dreaming about the luck can not even notice when luck come and go. Each of us has luck, it is the hard working spirit makes us winners or losers.
      Lastly, we do need luck sometimes to further our scientific research. In this sort of situation, only hard working is probably not enough. Let us say, although Edison had already experimented more than one thousand kinks of materials which are not suitable to use as a lamp wick , he still had not found the right material. Then luck came and assisted him. Without the critical luck, we may still worry about the longevity of the light.
      In the final analysis, hard working is undoubtedly a crucial element in people's success, but claims like "luck has nothing to do with success" or " luck is nothing to success" are utterly ungrounded.
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