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                        Electronic Waste
  Today, there are more and more smart electronic products, Such as MP3, CD, and Electronic dictionary and so on, and these products’ live is very short. So there are millions of electronic wastes every year. These wastes should be harm to our environment for their chemical element. Every year, thousands of people are ill for electronic waste.
    In order to decrease the waste, we should use tools as healthy and long as we can when it is still useful. Once your electronic is broken up, you should throw it in the right place that cleaners can send it to factory where can make it harmless even renew. Third, if you find some electronics are thrown any where, you should take it to the right place.
    Last and the most, we should develop our science and can broke down the electronic waste in shorter time .Of course , green electronic is perfect.

我想说几点主要问题
一，用词太重复了
二，有点欠缺逻辑
三，很明显的中式英语

而最主要的是要把开头写好，四六级考试的审阅老师不会很认真地读完全篇文章，往往开头好了就可以了。。。

呵呵，可能说的有点狠，还请楼主不要在意。。。