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本帖被 stefan 从 校园&时事 移动到本区(2007-08-20)
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58  is profits the only purpose of company ? 

Currently , especially when we step into the information age with the rapidly growth of the economy worldwidely , most of the companys adopt the faith of " maximum profits at lowest cost "  . It is adimittedly that there is not much agrument around this faith , but  presonally speaking , I assume that every single company should  abide by the law and regulations endorsed by the government , and also should not violate the general moral standard which is acknowledged be the public .
Firstly , each company should not bribe the government officier in order to reach some economical benefits  , such as getting  a majoy construction project , passing the license , and so on and so forth .  I have recently been quite thrilled by the transprancy which the Beijing 2008 Oymipic committe displayed during the process of choosing and deciding the construction plan and company in the Olympic-related sports studium. 
secondly , not all the law could restrict harmful behaviors of the company , so  moral standard at this kind of condition should play a crucial role .  For  instances , some companys forces their employee to work some extra time only providing the some amount of money as the usual work hour . actually , there is certian law against this , but most of the employee do not speak it out fearing they might lose job .  It is mostly same as the pollution problem  , there is law explicitly againgst it , but still many company dump the wastes , give off the toxic gas , pour the polluted water  , and so on.
As discussed above , the company should not only settle the profits as the only goal in their business pursuiting , they should take the government law , as well as the social moral standars  into deep consideration . 

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‘rapidly’in the first line of the text should be corrected to 'rapid',it must to be a adjective .
'most of the companys' in the second line can be changed to 'most companys',it's more simple.
'It is adimittedly '------'It is adimitted'.
'should  abide by the law ' add 'be'.
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