The graph presents the trend of household with personal computers in America from 1980 to 1988.
The line
(line是指直线吧)shows a
uniformly(这里用这个词准确吗,我保留意见) upward trend in the eight years. In 1980, the percentage of personal computers in household is 0.2%. That is to say, only two families in every one thousand families in America had their
own(好像跟personal的意思不太一样吧) computers at that time. However, things had going to be quite different in 1988,
when the figure raised up to 21%, 105 times of that in 1980.(during which the figure has raised up to 21%,105 times as much as that of 1980)The curve reveals a sharp rise during the 1982-1983 period. In 1982,
onlyfive families in every one thousand families possessed personal computers.
,while the...The percentage increased to 10% in 1983. During 1983 to 1987, the slope of the line decreases, which means that the growth becomes dull. The percentage increases merely by 10% in this four-year period. In the 1987-1988 period, the growth of household with personal computers in the US slowed down again: that year
(貌似有歧异,前面说1987-1988,这里是that year?), the increase is [场区咯然=blue]simply(好像不正确) 1%.
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不好意思,没认真改,仅作交流...
bless!
各位继续
btw:我没考过雅哈....不懂具体的规矩...
[ 此贴被kiwiy在2007-07-07 12:27重新编辑 ]
