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      Shoud the university campus refuse tourtiets
  These days,more and more people enjoy visiting local university campus when they are on their  travelling way.Some people think it is accetaple but others don't think so.
    In order to avoid frequencely visiting,which may interupt the normal studying,some people suggest that campus shoud forbidden tourists' visiting..They say if people come to school now and soon,the  students will lost their hearts on studying,and tourists may take some unhealthy in.
    But on others' opinion,tourists come to school won't interupt at all.They think when we are colleage students we all beacome social man  and campus life is one of it.So tourists shouldn't refused.
    What I think is we shoudn't refuse the visitor,but we may shoud shut down the campus in some special days.

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顶端 Posted: 2007-11-20 11:32 | [楼 主]
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frequencely visiting      frequent visiting  (frequencely貌似是副词)
shoud forbidden    should forbide(这是forbide的完成时,应该用原形吧~~`原形可能是这样,也可能不对,我只是纠正个语法错误)
lost  lose
take some unhealthy in.  unhealthy是副词,这里应该再加个名词吧。。。最简单的应该是加个things
But on others' opinion,tourists come to school won't interupt at all.  opinion后应该加个S代表大多数人的意见  后面的应该是that  tourists come to school won't interupt at all.
beacome                      become
So tourists shouldn't refused.                So tourists shouldn't be refused.
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