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carl



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MY  ANGEL


Since the first sight in the motel
Your smile went with a deep print in my heart
In the bar, I drink with your face in my eyes
A real fool you may say
Life with your mile and winking is colorful
However, you don`t know me


God makes fun of me ,
You stand before me again as an angel
I am mad about you
I believe that you are the girl I was born to meet


Setbacks came for us
Your helplessness and tears is heartbreaking
But you can never give up ,since you are no longer alone
We forward with a dim feeling


Running on the soccer field
Playing on the seashore
Breathing the nature of the sea
Your smiling is so beautiful ,your king heart moves every one around
The time to separate is so heartbreaking
It is not right for me to hold you—my angel in hand
I don`t have the heart to snap your wings
Angel without wings is not the one I like
So I unfold my hand
Seeing you flying far away
Tears welled up without no one knows
I believe we can be together
Since both of us have a dream in the heart –angle still need to find some one to fall back on
But ……where are you , my angel?





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    GG OR MM 是外语学院的?
    还能用英语写诗,太强悍了. 至少我是没试过.
    不过押韵压的不好
    顶端 Posted: 2007-09-13 22:18 | [1 楼]
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