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各位高手帮我改下英文简历啊!!万分感谢!!

下面有中文对照         红色部分是根据大家的建议改的
                            Resume
BaseInfoBasic info
Name:XXXXXXX             Gender: male
Contact: Mobile (XXXXXXXXX)     E—Mail:XX
Education: UESTCUniversity of Electronic Science and Technology of China(bachelor)     DepartmentShool:Microelectronics and Solid -State Electronics.
△Major:Electronic Science and Technology, Solid -State Electronics. (Information Materials Engineering)
△Major Comment: Studies in such fields as Electronic Materials & Components, Microelectronic Devices and Integrated Circuits.


Skills
△English:   CET6:XXX (2005).
Good at communicating with oral English , have a good command of reading specialized English material. good at both communication with oral English , and reading specialized English documents.
△Computer: National Computer Rank Examination Certificate Grade: 2 Language: C
Be skilled atin assemble language and C, know some VC. Familiar with the Windows series operation system, good at using softwares like Office, Auto CAD, Photoshop, etc.
Practices
▲Practiced in the Magnet- Material Lab of the school(National class lab), studied the theory, function, production and application of the Ferrite-Magnet- Material with the guidance of professor Liu Yingli. We did serious study on MnZn and NiZn Magnet-Material. I represented strong ability of learning and gained the appreciation of professor Liu.2006.8——2006.9
△Designed and assembled a radio independently. Programmed and operated numerical controlled lathe to produce a craftwork independently 2005.7
△Visited the Nuclear Physics Academe of China, Hong Ke Electronic Materials Factory in Chengdu and Kai Yuan Magnetic Materials Factory in Mianyang. 2006.6
Activities
Editorial Internship of the West IT Web. Two articles on digital products been published on the web.2006.4——2006.6
Attended the Red-Sailboat Association, being the secretary of the Outreach Department.   2003.10——2004.10
Attended the football league held by school every semester.
Interests
Computer,football and music.
Self-appraisal
Good ability of self-study, self-control, team play, communication and solving problems.



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Good at communicating with oral English , have a good command of reading specialized English material.
虽然我英语差,但觉得这句话不哈,语句搭配上有问题
顶端 Posted: 2006-09-12 18:18 | [1 楼]
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