这个曲线图说的是从1940年到2040年三个不同国家65岁以上人口的比例变化情况,根据图中所给信息写一篇文章,不少于150字.....

其中粗实线是美国,细实线是日本,虚线是瑞典.


照得不太清楚,请鉴谅..............


从过去写到将来,时态直接把我整萎了...................



A glance at the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in Japan ,Sweden and USA reflects the great differences that exist between Western and Asian nations.
The proportion of population aged 65 and over in the USA rose very slowly between 1940 and 1960 from 9% to 10%,and continued to climb until around 1980 at 15% at a faster rate. After a slight dropfrom 1980 to 2019,the proportion continues to rise,peaking at about 23% in 2040.
A similar situation was seen in Sweden,where athe proportion of population rose from about 7% in 1940 to about 14% four decades later.From this point until 2040,the proportion rises sharply,with some fluctuations,to approximately 25,a litter higher than USA.
Things are very different in Japan,there was a gradual decrease from 1940(5%) to 1960(3%) which then leveled off between 1960 and 1985.And then the proportion started to climb gradually until about 2028 at 10%,just before a significant soar to 25% in about 2035,pass Sweden and USA seperately .Finally the proportion of population reach the peak at about 27% in 2040,a little more than the two Western countries.


[ 此帖被wenqiang在2008-04-16 22:47重新编辑 ]

你为什么要弄这个

我这里有答案啊。。。

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引用第1楼格格乐心于2008-04-14 23:16发表的  :
你为什么要弄这个

自己写的作文很难自己看出错误...
我只是想让大家帮我看看我的错误有哪些

其实考研作文我就没写完

  好模糊的图

差不多就行了
反正主要还是把要点抓住就行了

圆圆啊，我都不说你，单词错误一大堆先。。。。popution Japen
给你一个建议 自己写出来的东西先扔到WORD里面看一下，一些基本错误就能出来了。然后再考虑别的。先过第一关啦

嘲讽    

我是糙的,居然连这种单词都写错了
^_^