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先来第一篇, 关于mandatory retirement 的.

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No.1
Recently, there has arisen a contentious debate over whether people should be forced to retire at a certain age. From my point of view, I am strongly against mandatory retirement.

It is undeniable that mandatory retirement has its merits, that is to say, it can make older people enjoy the remaining life and create more job opportunities for young people.

However, we should never lose sight of its demerits. Mandatory retirement is a brazen infringement on people’s right to work, which they desire to create something and make more contribution to the society.

Additionally, the 21st century is known as the era of lifelong learning and lifelong working. Besides, in the future, a declining may give rise to a shortage of skilled and knowledgeable employees, which will, consequently, seriously affect the productivity of organizations. Studies have shown that many ageing workers continue to work at maximum efficiency and that age-related changes had little effect on their productivity unless they had jobs that were physically demanding. Take scientists as an example, many of whom are over 60 or even older are still working and they play an important role in the development of technologies. And it is known that most of leaders in our government are old enough to retire, but they still remain in work force and make our country wealthier and more stable. Consequently, it makes no sense to propel an old but healthy and experienced worker to disengage from work place.

Taking into account all the factors mentioned above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that healthy people should not be forced to retire at a certain age, while those who are not healthy enough to work for a long period can retire earlier. As we know, older workers represent a source of experience, accumulated knowledge and wisdom.

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以后有时间的话, 会陆续推出: NO.2, NO3, ......
还是贴在这个帖子里.

好有科技含量~~

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引用第1楼ff-莉诺雅于2007-12-26 12:41发表的  :
好有科技含量~~

居然用"科技"这次, 太难得了.
谢谢!

我感觉这篇是所有当中写的最好的一篇了.

我来支持一个.. 不过, 考完后现在都不想看这种应试的作文了..
对准备中的同学还是蛮有用的哈.

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引用第3楼channing于2007-12-26 22:59发表的  :
我来支持一个.. 不过, 考完后现在都不想看这种应试的作文了..
对准备中的同学还是蛮有用的哈.

过来人一般都不会看的.
只能留给后人了.

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引用第2楼yyld于2007-12-26 18:37发表的  :

居然用"科技"这次, 太难得了.
谢谢!

我感觉这篇是所有当中写的最好的一篇了.

但愿我考试时也能写出这种水平...

lz让我顶，我不能不顶。。。
写的不错~~~

写得不错，至少有7分吧 ，但感觉论述段的论述观点上还不是很充分很系统

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引用第7楼xiongherui于2007-12-27 13:45发表的  :
但感觉论述段的论述观点上还不是很充分很系统

谢谢蝈蝈的提醒, 这也正是我一直有待加强的.

呵呵，现在不用写这些了吧，你出去吗，我不出了，学院不给保研的开在读证明，再加上我是转专业

没有明白考雅思的作用
到$不是G和T不就行了么？到加和澳T就ok了啊

thank you!

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引用第9楼xiongherui于2007-12-28 12:43发表的  :
呵呵，现在不用写这些了吧，你出去吗，我不出了，学院不给保研的开在读证明，再加上我是转专业

暂时先不出了.
我也转专业了.
保了研不大好办. 不过我还是知道有人保研还是出去了的, 可他的情况比较特殊.

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引用第0楼yyld于2007-12-25 23:00发表的 雅思作文分享 :
首先声明: 以下的作文都是本人独自完成, 传到这里仅供大家参考. 请勿转载!
先来第一篇, 关于mandatory retirement 的.

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为什么我的原创TOEFL iBT作文没什么人来看呢， 我考的时候大作文是Good ( 4.0-5.0)哈！

http://192.168.2.8/bbs/read.php?tid=581524

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引用第13楼asdfghasdfgh于2008-01-01 19:30发表的  :

为什么我的原创TOEFL iBT作文没什么人来看呢， 我考的时候大作文是Good ( 4.0-5.0)哈！

http://192.168.2.8/bbs/read.php?tid=581524

我去看了.
如果LZ发到这里版块来的话, 肯定有很多人看的.