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英文简历,里面有很多错,希望大家能帮我指出来

格式阿,措辞阿,拼写之类的错误



                    R e s u m e
Name:     Ryan Chen      
Degree:   Bachelor  
Tel:       13402805027    
E-mail:     Chan191099241@hotmail.com    
Major:     Electronic Science and Technology

Language Skills:
English: CET-4
Excellent in listening and speaking.
Have the Experience of communicating with foreigners for nearly 2 years. Currently have 4 foreign friends in touch


Computer Skills
Skilled in Window,Office,MATLAB,AutoCAD,SCM,and DSP, etc.
A good mastery of some computer languages: C,assemble language,VHDL, etc.


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 Moderator and linkman Of an English corner Chat room at [url]www.liaoliao.com

Computer salesman of “NOVA Computer Center”, gained outstanding achievement, be on the first of the rank list

A member of a subtitle workgroup, successfully translate several American film/TV episodes subtitles into Chinese, and several original Hip-Hop songs being created, the team finally gains a great reputation .on forum “5Come5”



 Visit and learn skills in Zhengyuan Magnetic Material Company, Atomic Physics Research Center, Hongming ,Huangke Electronic Company, and the Research Center of UESTC




My Highlights:
great performance in oral English
A fast learner ,great team player/leader , and always the moderator in a team




Character: honest, reliable, creative, independent and cooperative .creative
Hobbies: music, sports and outdoor activities.



Education:
Sept.1996~2002   Bashu Middle School (Best Middle School in ChongQing                                                                 currently )  
Sept.2002~present   University of Electronic Science and Technology of China.
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英文简历一般来说Education是不是写在前面啊?
Skilled in Window中Window应该加s。
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楼主给的[屏蔽]连不上啊?
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反正格式多种多样 想怎么写就怎么写
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Currently have 4 foreign friends in touch.....................
何不找他们给你改呢???
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引用第4楼47862990于2006-10-09 10:42发表的:
Currently have 4 foreign friends in touch.....................
何不找他们给你改呢???


那都是网友啦
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  最好的简历是写得既简短又內容丰富。目前英文简历主要这三种形式:按年月順序编排的简历、按技能和能力編排的简历及混合形式的简历。下面分别以范例进行描述:

  第一大类、按年月順序编排的简历: 这是一种最常见的写简历的方式。它从最近的工作经历讲起﹐列举每一份工作的成绩,然后再列举教育背景,以时间为主线。

ANNA KING
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Address: 15 Sample Rd Melbourne VIC 3000
Email: a.king@jxue.com
Home phone: (123) 9999-1234
Work phone: (123) 9999-5678

EMPLOYMENT HISTORY
Marketing Manager (Melbourne)   1995-present time
The Wine and Food Emporium
Duties:
 -Manage a staff of 18 people
 -Liaise with advertising agencies (above and below the line) and brief in all campaigns
 -Responsible for $15 million dollar advertising budget and $80 million turnover
 -Launched two new brands onto national market gaining 15 per cent and 22 per cent market share respectively within two years, earning the MIA’s 1998 Award for Best New Product.
 -Generated over $200,000 of free trade-journal publicity

Marketing Research Manager   1990-1996
Di Pastio Pasta Products (Queensland)
Duties:
 -Merchandise products in supermarkets - 78 stores
 -Build in-store promotional displays (12 product lines)
 -Liaise with store managers and advise on re-ordering quantities (increased average store buy by 28 per cent in six months)
 -Maximise shelf display coverage and facings
 -Managed and co-ordinated 28 sales promotional events per year.

EDUCATION
University of Queensland, Bachelor of Business (Marketing) 1996
Seacliff TAFE, Associate Diploma in Marketing 1986

COMPUTERS
Platforms: Apple, IBM
Software: Windows 95, Word 6, Excel, PowerPoint, PageMaker, Internet-trained
Typing: 65 WPM

TRAINING
Train the Trainer Accreditation

SPECIAL SKILLS
Co-author of seven articles for "Marketing Management" magazine
Key note speaker at the International MIA Annual Conference attended by 2,500 industry professionals
Board Member for "Life Skills For Youth" organisation and head of Mentoring Programme.
French (fluent in speech and written)

REFERENCES
Available on request.

  第二大类、按技能和能力編排的简历 这种方式是根据工作经验﹐按照技能和能力來写简历。

ANNA KING
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Address: 15 Sample Rd. Melbourne VIC 3000
Email: a.king@jxue.com
Work phone: (03) 999 5678

OBJECTIVE
A position in senior marketing management with an internationally focussed premium food, wine or produce company. Seeking to expand management and team-building skills and build solid brands throughout the world. Available to relocate locally or internationally.

SUMMARY OF SKILLS
MANAGEMENT
 -Managed a marketing team of 18 people, telemarketing teams of 75 people and a $15 million dollar advertising budget. Responsible for the client/agency liaison between mainstream, below-the-line and data management agencies. Responsible for the overall profitability of five brands, four of which are market leaders in both share and volume.

PRODUCT DEVELOPMENT
 -Responsible for the launch of two brands onto the national market with each brand gaining a market share of 15 per cent and 22 per cent respectively within two years.

FINANCIAL
 -Prepared quarterly and annual budget reports. Presented and reviewed the forecasts to senior management and represented the Australian management team at the International MIA conference held in Chicago last December.

MARKETING RESEARCH
 -Co-ordinated focus groups (24 per year) and managed a team of 75 in-store market researchers to conduct field demonstrations. Presented research findings to management teams, which used the information as the basis for their product development plans, resulting in the extension of a brand that brought in sales of $2.1 million in the 97-98 financial year.

SALES
 -Ground floor experience in sales and merchandising with international fast-moving packaged goods company. Territory Manager for North Western region covering 78 stores, 12 product lines and approximately 28 sales promotional events per year.

STAFF TRAINING
 -Accredited ’Train the Trainer’ Instructor. Initiator of the Mentoring Programme at ’Life Skills for Youth’ organisation and now Board Member.

PUBLIC SPEAKING
 -Key note presenter at the Annual MIA Conference and regular guest speaker at CPI Award nights.

COMPUTERS
 -Fluent in both Apple and IBM platforms; Proficient in Excel, Word 6, PowerPoint, PageMaker. Typing = 65 WPM. Internet trained.

PUBLISHED WORKS
 -Co-authored seven articles for the ’Marketing Management’ magazine.

LANGUAGES
 -Fluent in French, both written and spoken.

WORK HISTORY
1996-Present Time: THE WINE AND FOOD EMPORIUM, Melbourne
Marketing Manager
1990-1996: DI PASTIO PASTA PRODUCTS, Queensland
Marketing Research Manager
1987-[屏蔽]: FABER BISCUITS PTY LTD, Melbourne
Territory Manager (part-time)

EDUCATION
University of Queensland, Bachelor of Business (Marketing), 1996
Seacliff TAFE, Associate Diploma in Marketing, 1986

REFERENCES
Mr P Prentice, Di Pastio Products
Ph: (07) 999 7788
Ms D Schwimmer, Faber Biscuits
Ph: (03) 999 4321

  第三大类、混合形式的简历 把您的优势像技能﹐经验和能力放在前面﹐然后按年.月顺序列举工作经历和学历。

ANNA KING
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Address: 15 Sample Rd Melbourne VIC 3000
Email: a.king@jxue.com
Mobile: (123) 4561-2378
Work phone: (123) 4561-2378

OBJECTIVE
Senior Marketing Manager

SUMMARY
Nine years in sales and marketing with a broad range of experience from ground-floor sales and merchandising to marketing management with an international producer and exporter of fine food and wine.

MANAGEMENT
 -Managed a marketing team of 18 people, telemarketing teams of 75 people and was responsible for a $15 million dollar advertising budget. Responsible for the client/agency liaison between mainstream, below-the-line and data management agencies. Responsible for the overall profitability of five brands, four of which are market leaders in both share and volume.

PRODUCT DEVELOPMENT
 -Launched two brands onto the national market with each brand gaining a market share of 15 per cent and 22 per cent respectively within two years.

FINANCIAL
 -Prepared quarterly and annual budget reports. Presented and reviewed the forecasts to senior management and represented the Australian management team at the International MIA Conference held in Chicago last December.

MARKETING RESEARCH
 -Co-ordinated focus groups (24 per year) and managed a team of 75 in-store market researchers to conduct field demonstrations. Presented research findings to management teams, which used the information as the basis for their product development plans, resulting in the extension of a brand that brought in sales of $2.1 million in the 97-98 financial year.

SALES
 -Ground floor experience in sales and merchandising with international fast-moving packaged goods company. Territory Manager for North Western region covering 78 stores, 12 product lines and approximately 28 sales promotional events per year.

EMPLOYMENT HISTORY
Date: 1996-present time
Company: The Wine and Food Emporium
Title: Marketing Manager (Melbourne)
Duties: Responsible for a team of 18 people with an advertising budget of $15 million spread over 5 product lines. Chief liaison between client and agency and responsible for branding and product awareness. Increased turnover to $80 million dollars in the last financial year, a 15 per cent increase and was awarded the MIA’s 1998 Best New Product. Generated over $200,000 of free trade-journal publicity in the last year.

Date: 1990-1996
Company: Di Pastio Pasta Products (Sydney)
Title: Marketing Research Manager
Duties: Responsible for the management, co-ordination, recruitment and placement of 75 in-store demonstrators including an in-bound and out-bound telemarketing survey conducted in conjunction with the sampling demonstrations. Presented research findings to CEO level and was instrumental in the development of a new brand extension which resulted in a profit of $2.1 million for the company.

EDUCATION
University of Queensland, Bachelor of Business (Marketing), 1996
Seacliff TAFE, Associate Diploma in Marketing, 1986

REFEREES
Available on request.
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