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望达人给些建议      小弟先谢过了

本帖被 stefan 从 校园&时事 移动到本区(2007-08-20)
TOEFL iBT Writing 
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58  is profits the only purpose of company ? 

Currently , especially when we step into the information age with the rapidly growth of the economy worldwidely , most of the companys adopt the faith of " maximum profits at lowest cost "  . It is adimittedly that there is not much agrument around this faith , but  presonally speaking , I assume that every single company should  abide by the law and regulations endorsed by the government , and also should not violate the general moral standard which is acknowledged be the public .
Firstly , each company should not bribe the government officier in order to reach some economical benefits  , such as getting  a majoy construction project , passing the license , and so on and so forth .  I have recently been quite thrilled by the transprancy which the Beijing 2008 Oymipic committe displayed during the process of choosing and deciding the construction plan and company in the Olympic-related sports studium. 
secondly , not all the law could restrict harmful behaviors of the company , so  moral standard at this kind of condition should play a crucial role .  For  instances , some companys forces their employee to work some extra time only providing the some amount of money as the usual work hour . actually , there is certian law against this , but most of the employee do not speak it out fearing they might lose job .  It is mostly same as the pollution problem  , there is law explicitly againgst it , but still many company dump the wastes , give off the toxic gas , pour the polluted water  , and so on.
As discussed above , the company should not only settle the profits as the only goal in their business pursuiting , they should take the government law , as well as the social moral standars  into deep consideration . 

time : 26 minutes

期待您的指正   


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顶端 Posted: 2007-08-20 12:08 | [楼 主]
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work some extra time only providing the some amount of money as the usual work hour

some extra time        第二处是same吧。。。

each company should not bribe the government officier in order to reach some economical benefits 

否定句是不是要改成any......

楼主发到英语版块去吧。


[ 此贴被chenyukang在2007-08-20 12:59重新编辑 ]
顶端 Posted: 2007-08-20 12:50 | [1 楼]
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and also should not violate the general moral standard which is acknowledged be the public .

is  be  可以这样用吗??
两个助动词
顶端 Posted: 2007-08-20 13:12 | [2 楼]
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改称by不知能不能
顶端 Posted: 2007-08-20 13:12 | [3 楼]
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顶端 Posted: 2007-08-20 13:26 | [4 楼]
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顶端 Posted: 2007-08-20 14:55 | [5 楼]
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‘rapidly’in the first line of the text should be corrected to 'rapid',it must to be a adjective .
'most of the companys' in the second line can be changed to 'most companys',it's more simple.
'It is adimittedly '------'It is adimitted'.
'should  abide by the law ' add 'be'.
只是粗看了几眼,仅供参考
顶端 Posted: 2007-08-20 16:33 | [7 楼]
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Quote:
引用第7楼赌侠于2007-08-20 16:33发表的  :
‘rapidly’in the first line of the text should be corrected to 'rapid',it must to be a adjective .
'most of the companys' in the second line can be changed to 'most companys',it's more simple.
'It is adimittedly '------'It is adimitted'.
'should  abide by the law ' add 'be'.
只是粗看了几眼,仅供参考

thank you very much
顶端 Posted: 2007-08-20 17:48 | [8 楼]
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应该是改by吧,试一试阿
顶端 Posted: 2007-08-21 01:46 | [9 楼]
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